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5toclose · « **on:** July 01, 2012, 07:27:46 PM »

Hey there,

I'm designing a new deck and I'd love some initial feedback. Here is the Ace of Spades and 4 different back designs. What do you think? How would you suggest tweaking it? Which of the 4 backs do you like the best?

I'm planning to name the deck "Surge". Any other suggestions that come to mind from looking at it?

Thanks!

Mark

loldudex2 · « **Reply #1 on:** July 01, 2012, 09:02:21 PM »

My favorite back is #2!

Also, where's the ace of spades, all I see is the ace of diamonds

xela · « **Reply #2 on:** July 01, 2012, 09:06:27 PM »

I love the design, but I feel the backs cut off way too abruptly and that there needs to be more to fill that black void. Also, having the design borderless top-to-bottom but with a border left-to-right makes for terrible thumb fans and awkward vertical table spreads.

Even out the design more. Definitely keep this concept as well as the art style. It's very sexy. Excellent color scheme as well.

5toclose · « **Reply #3 on:** July 01, 2012, 10:53:03 PM »

Thanks for the suggestion alex. Here are a few variations. What do you think? I'm tried giving them a fuller look on the back so you won't just see black corners when you spread them in your hand.

loldudex2, I mistyped. I meant to say diamond...I'm still working on the spades though I think that ace will be pretty awesome!

Mark

5toclose · « **Reply #4 on:** July 01, 2012, 11:23:32 PM »

One more full back variation:

Mark

Eyeball · « **Reply #5 on:** July 02, 2012, 02:48:45 PM »

Personally I liked the Ace without the corners that you added, and I like the first full back design a lot

I like the neon green+black combination you are using for this deck, could make for some cool looking flourishes.

5toclose · « **Reply #6 on:** July 03, 2012, 09:28:12 AM »

I'm getting pretty excited about this deck the more it comes along. Thanks so much for your feedback!

Here is another version of the back with a stronger/bolder surge of color in the corner.

What are your thoughts about the Ace of Diamonds and the Five of Spades? Any suggestions there? I can't decide which pattern I like for the numbered cards (surge in corner or not). Thanks!!!

Evan · « **Reply #7 on:** July 03, 2012, 07:44:13 PM »

I think this deck would look awesome with thin, shadow borders like the Tendril deck!

I really like the design so far. The latest back design is my favorite so far an I like the face cards with the design in the corners.

ItsMagicITellYou~ · « **Reply #8 on:** July 03, 2012, 10:45:07 PM »

i think the new corners looks pretty nice! how about some borders?

NathanCanadas · « **Reply #9 on:** July 04, 2012, 04:49:44 PM »

Quote from: Evan on July 03, 2012, 07:44:13 PM

I think this deck would look awesome with thin, shadow borders like the Tendril deck!

I really like the design so far. The latest back design is my favorite so far an I like the face cards with the design in the corners.

I agree with Evan. These would look great with small borders, and I also like the last design best.

jmrock · « **Reply #10 on:** July 12, 2012, 04:26:20 PM »

I don't know another way to say it, and I don't want to hurt your feeling, but just simply... No...

Everyone and their grandmother seems to want a deck today... Did you see the recent Steampunk deck? The Ornate Deck? Take a look at the two of them, and then look at what you're posting above and just stop... I don't need to get into specifics... It's just really, really awful... It's really enough already...

lordlupus · « **Reply #11 on:** July 12, 2012, 08:11:35 PM »

Quote from: jmrock on July 12, 2012, 04:26:20 PM

I don't know another way to say it, and I don't want to hurt your feeling, but just simply... No...

Everyone and their grandmother seems to want a deck today... Did you see the recent Steampunk deck? The Ornate Deck? Take a look at the two of them, and then look at what you're posting above and just stop... I don't need to get into specifics... It's just really, really awful... It's really enough already...

Dude, the only way for a designer to learn and improve if you are more constructive and SPECIFIC in your criticisms. Just because you like the Ornate or Steampunk (I hope you are talking about Steampunk Heroes) decks doesn't mean ALL of us think so as well. Some like details, some like simplicity. Some like sci-fi design, some like skulls n bones. And this current design is no way close to the Ape sh*t design that you were kicking sand at (which I wholeheartedly agreed with

) Everyone has to start somewhere.

I like the new back design posted and I prefer surge in corners numbered fronts. I personally do not like borders but I cannot say whether I will buy this deck since the gist of the deck will be in how you design your Jokers, court cards and AoS. If the design is strong in those cards and the theme makes sense, I am down for a couple.

Don Boyer · « **Reply #12 on:** July 13, 2012, 07:07:12 AM »

@jmrock - Bro, I know what you're talking about. I'm not a fan of this design, not any iterations of it, but I've been simply staying out of it. There's no need to piss on their parade and call it rain. Just ignore it and move on; it's easier for everyone. Live and let live, etc.

5toclose · « **Reply #13 on:** July 21, 2012, 05:06:18 AM »

Okay, I've done some more work on this deck. I added white borders to the cards. I've also got some potential ideas for the face cards. Here are some king variations. Any stand out?

I'm going to keep messing around with different ideas. I like the deck so far and I'm hoping that your feedback will help me make it an awesome deck. In the end if it just doesn't seem to be working, that is fine, but I figure I might as well give it my best effort first. Thanks for your feedback!

Don Boyer · « **Reply #14 on:** July 21, 2012, 05:19:09 AM »

Quote from: 5toclose on July 21, 2012, 05:06:18 AM

Okay, I've done some more work on this deck. I added white borders to the cards. I've also got some potential ideas for the face cards. Here are some king variations. Any stand out?

I'm going to keep messing around with different ideas. I like the deck so far and I'm hoping that your feedback will help me make it an awesome deck. In the end if it just doesn't seem to be working, that is fine, but I figure I might as well give it my best effort first. Thanks for your feedback!

I don't think any of those four are really blending well with what you've done so far. Perhaps you need to go a little more unconventionally and try capturing some of the imagery from the card back and the aces, creating a court that uses that imagery effectively.

BTW: there's another deck heading to market in the near-future with the same name. The sequel to the Bicycle Galvanic deck will be the Bicycle Surge deck...I'm guessing it will be out in a year, give or take.

Evan · « **Reply #15 on:** July 21, 2012, 02:37:46 PM »

I think #2 of the King of Diamonds is the best. It looks really awesome and unlike any other deck!

5toclose · « **Reply #16 on:** July 22, 2012, 11:07:39 PM »

What do you think about this King? I feel like this style fits the deck better and am pretty excited about it. Thanks for your feedback!

Don Boyer · « **Reply #17 on:** July 22, 2012, 11:12:20 PM »

Of all the court designs so far, this is probably closest to the theme.

Recommendation: either lose the frame around the king or use it by inserting some of those swirly-gas effects in the background, perhaps in a different shade or color to set it apart from the king effectively.

xela · « **Reply #18 on:** July 23, 2012, 12:26:57 AM »

Lose the frame around the king like Don said.

Also, look up a more fitting font for the indices. Add an inner-shadow to the pips to make them stand out from their outer-glow a bit more. Depth is everything.

The last court card you showed me is absolutely awesome. Already I like this deck more than the Galvanic. Keep us posted.

Don Boyer · « **Reply #19 on:** July 23, 2012, 03:43:41 AM »

Quote from: alex. on July 23, 2012, 12:26:57 AM

Lose the frame around the king like Don said.

Also, look up a more fitting font for the indices. Add an inner-shadow to the pips to make them stand out from their outer-glow a bit more. Depth is everything.

The last court card you showed me is absolutely awesome. Already I like this deck more than the Galvanic. Keep us posted.

What Alex mentioned about typefaces is CRITICAL. A really nice deck with not-so-easily read indices means the deck won't be all that popular with people who actually use cards as opposed to locking them in a vault in order to wait for their value to appreciate. An index should be read and understood in a fraction of a second, or it's too complicated in its design.

Consider something both simple and sans-serif.

Lara Krystle "Lane" · « **Reply #20 on:** July 27, 2012, 11:32:03 PM »

The king resembles BATMAN and magneto put together. hahahaha! Its not a bad thing, I was just pointing out the resemblance. But from the past court cards that you posted, this one looks much better and fits the theme and its something new (for me at least).

I agree with both Don and alex, lose the frame, it will make your courtcard stand out more and the design will look cleaner and well put together.

ps. it also looks kinda like the tower of Sauron

<3 <3 it!

xoxo
Lara

5toclose · « **Reply #21 on:** July 29, 2012, 08:46:19 PM »

Okay, I've added some touches to the border and changed up the symbols to a black symbol with a faint glow. I also changed the Ace design. Let me know what you think. I'm thinking of redoing the back with something different and renaming the deck as well to something else. We'll see...

xela · « **Reply #22 on:** July 29, 2012, 09:01:18 PM »

So I am a bit lost here. Are you associated with Sean Whelan in any way? :|

KPopFever605 · « **Reply #23 on:** July 29, 2012, 09:18:41 PM »

Quote from: alex. on July 29, 2012, 09:01:18 PM

So I am a bit lost here. Are you associated with Sean Whelan in any way? :|

I don't think so. If he were, the design would be a bit more intricate. I believe it's from a different creator, but applies a similar theme.

Lara Krystle "Lane" · « **Reply #24 on:** July 29, 2012, 09:36:56 PM »

@alex I was wondering the same thing as well. But as Kpopfever said they are (most probably) not associated with each other, jut had a similar idea. Kinda like what happened to the Mystery Deck and the NOCs.

But anyway. I lvoe the simplicity of the Ace of Spades there. The indice is much better than the first one you showed up, although the pip under the indice is a bit "fat"(?) no too fond of it. Over all I think its looking like it pulling together nicely.

Oh here is one thing. Try thinner boarders.

xoxo
Lara