How much did the creator do to convince you this was a pro-grade project by a can-deliver person? On this deck, I'd say "Not much!"
Ouch, that's kind of harsh. Let's face it, most young computer saavy people took a photoshop class at school, have some basic knowledge of graphic design and want to make a little cash if they can doing it. What they lack is experienced folk like yourself to advise them. To guide them on how and what to offer. To help edit the design. To flesh out the concept. But as you know (I was a software consultant for 12 years so I know), people are reluctant to pay for consultants on something as simple as a Kickstarter project. Creating decks to sell publicly should follow a business plan:
Who is your target market
What products are available that are similar to yours
What kind of opportunity exists and is the market already saturated
Who is your test group
How many options/variants on the theme have you designed
How much money do you want to earn
What kind of budget are you working with
Can you afford to pay for advice
Material Costs
Labor Costs
Taxes
Manufacturing Costs
Shipping Costs
1. Design
2. Edit
3. Test market
4. Build a following
5. Determine and review costs with vendors
6. Build a profit/loss scenario
7. Define post production distribution/sales
8. Create teaser advertising
9. Position the product to the right audience in the right venue
10. Provide Incentives to potential buyers (uncut sheets...)
11. Build a rapid fire response to making the product public to gain #1 on the Popular Lists
12. Have a planned communication plan (Timing, message, delivery, promotion, build rapport...)
13. Communicate after completion of the project
14. Get materials to manufacturer to schedule earliest production dates
15. Make all payments into escrow if possible
16. Prep shipping materials, labeling, packing...
16a. Communicate to your buyers
17. Ship
18. Get Feedback
19. Launch post production sales
That's just off the top of my head with the two minues of free time I had. I'm sure I missed much more, I don't have a project plan in front of me at the moment.