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Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #25 on: October 20, 2014, 07:27:12 AM »
 

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It's an improvement but you need to do something about the indices.  Placement is good, but they're black and white printed on a background that's also black and white.  Wipe off that background under the index and you should have a better looking card.  Think of using an alternate font, as well - that "faux Oriental" font is kind of passe and borderline racist, I would think - anything elegant, narrow and sans serif would work with the style as well as being more clear and readable.  It's also worth considering to place a suit symbol next to the lady's head, like you would see on a traditional court card.  In fact, you should use a plainer spade in the index and save the fancy spade for the body of the card.

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Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #26 on: October 21, 2014, 03:47:37 PM »
 

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IMHO: Nice Pisces but remove them from the borders. Playing cards and some collage are different things.
The lady itself is really nice. Don't spoil the Queen of Spades with unnecessary elements. 


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Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #27 on: October 30, 2014, 11:33:15 AM »
 

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That queen is absolutely stunningly beautiful. Well Done!!!
 

Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #28 on: November 11, 2014, 05:42:16 AM »
 

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back of playing card
« Last Edit: November 11, 2014, 11:25:45 AM by vovkalex »
 

Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #29 on: November 11, 2014, 07:48:02 AM »
 

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That's some nice artwork!  Would love to see a full color version.  :D
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Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #30 on: November 17, 2014, 12:12:53 PM »
 

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These look pretty cool, I also would like to see full color on the cards. 
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Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #31 on: November 17, 2014, 05:47:03 PM »
 

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Loving the Samurai backs!!
 

Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #32 on: November 17, 2014, 09:16:20 PM »
 

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I think Gold and Black would look good on the Samurai.  Maybe a dab of other colors like silver/grey. The red and blue look too plain to me.  JMO
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Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #33 on: November 18, 2014, 01:58:15 AM »
 

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I think Gold and Black would look good on the Samurai.  Maybe a dab of other colors like silver/grey. The red and blue look too plain to me.  JMO

I, on the other hand, like the monochrome style of the deck in red and blue.  It hearkens back to the old-school decks of the early 20th century, and I really like a white, borderless design like this - very elegant and clean.  I looks in no small part like one of my favorite decks, Bicycle Limited Edition #1.
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Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #34 on: November 25, 2014, 07:37:29 PM »
 

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@vovkalex - You need to throw something in the top left corner of your back of card.  Anything you want.  Doesn't matter what color.  You have to much white negative space there....
 

Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #35 on: November 25, 2014, 08:22:05 PM »
 

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I agree with Sprouts, that is a lot of negative space in prime location.
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Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #36 on: November 26, 2014, 02:53:59 AM »
 

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@vovkalex - You need to throw something in the top left corner of your back of card.  Anything you want.  Doesn't matter what color.  You have to much white negative space there....
I agree with Sprouts, that is a lot of negative space in prime location.

I actually LIKE that it has an empty corner like that.  Corners are majorly important to flourishers, but shouldn't be an issue to anyone else.  In fact, for poker, they're awesome as they are - there's no place to hide any kind of marks or indicators.  You don't see that often in deck design and I feel it makes this deck distinctive in a good way.
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Re: Playing cards Sunrise
« Reply #37 on: November 29, 2014, 12:52:32 AM »
 

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I was going to bring up the point Don did. Great for card players, and the back in cool enough with out anything extra.
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